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palaima
13th of February 2010 (Sat), 17:23
hi,
So i haven't been out with my camera for some time now and was very very frustrated because i came back home with only 4 keepers :/
These are half of them, what do you think? Does the swan shot need a tad more contrast or the soft B&W look is ok (i personally like it :) ):
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2677/4354120462_b10a55a115_o.jpg
This is at 1.4
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4037/4354120174_b9f3d030d0_o.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4022/4353372425_53f657da66_o.jpg

Cheers,
Paulius

vk2gwk
13th of February 2010 (Sat), 21:17
I am not so sure about #1. The swans head is pretty much cut of and th bill is OOF. There should have been more DOF in that shot.

#2 is nice and sharp.

#3 needs een closer crop, without the part of the flyer at the top and less of the pavement at the right hand side. Than it could have something...

palaima
14th of February 2010 (Sun), 07:01
^ i agree with you. Looked at my other pictures, and these just didn't stand up to the standard...

Cheers,
Paulius