leaving paradise

[Quarantine]

did this one last week. comments welcome

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v337/Quarintine/salehwindowef2.jpg

[skidzam]

Hi Quarantine! I really like this shot very moody and contemplative. The only suggestion I could make to maybe give it more impact is the crop the last two windows because my eye tends to go up through the strong diagonal on the windows and doesn't focus as much on the subject. But even if you don't agree, it's a very well done image.

[silvrr]

Great shot.

I have to disagree with the above. My eye was lead to the guy by the line of windows. I would leave as is.

[jm_usmc]

I like it. Where was this taken?

[windpig]

Very nice.

[Naturalist]

Very nicely done and a very unique image.

[Quarantine]

thank you for your positive feedback. I can see it working with or without the last two windows, but decided to keep it as is.

[Tyger]

nah, I love it the way it is, awesome! Simple but very effective. Love the dead space usage too!

[AlphaChicken]

nah, I love it the way it is, awesome! Simple but very effective. Love the dead space usage too!

It is not called "dead space usage", if that was the case it would not be dead space. ;-)

It is called negative space, and I agree it is used brilliantly here.

[Matt Peters]

Awesome!! :D

[elcobbler]

Awesome shot!