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vvDO
18th of February 2010 (Thu), 23:18
Here's the link...

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4005/4369806582_3f3558ed26_b.jpg

Shot in jpeg with Tokina 50-135 on a tripod, PP in lightroom 3 beta, cropped out some sky and other slight exposure/WB/color adjustments.

Can't wait to hear any comments,

Thanks,

usukshooter
19th of February 2010 (Fri), 05:06
It's a bit flat and hazy. You don't have much detail in the rocks in the foreground anyway so I would just darken the overall image and also lay a black gradient in overlay mode on the top half of the image.

Meanderthal
19th of February 2010 (Fri), 08:26
Beautiful scene, nice composition. usukshooter's edit is cheerful, though my edit would likely be brighter and a bit lower in saturation. It's a matter of personal taste.

joedlh
19th of February 2010 (Fri), 09:30
It's a bit flat and hazy. You don't have much detail in the rocks in the foreground anyway so I would just darken the overall image and also lay a black gradient in overlay mode on the top half of the image.

I was about to say the same thing. In addition, there's noise in the foreground rocks that the edit reduces.

Free2BeMePhotography
19th of February 2010 (Fri), 11:27
I think it's beautiful!!! :D

vvDO
20th of February 2010 (Sat), 02:28
Ah yes looking better, now I can try that on the 30 other pics I took.

Thanks for the comments and your time.