First attempt on outdoor photograpy (human)

[doty]

Well, this is my first attempt. Taken with 50D with Canon 135mm and Sigma 30mm lens. Sad to say ive been hearing losta negatives feedbacks..on my photos..help me out with it! Thanks!

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4377680878_dcdd99789e_b.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4015/4375907475_a81b3e0140_b.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2715/4376225395_2b1163fd87_b.jpg

More over here (http://www.flickr.com/photos/doty001/sets/72157623356256043/)

[howaboutnow]

Where is this negative feedback? I think they are very good for your "first attempt", especially having such a beautiful model as well!

Last pic horizon crooked, and her legs are a lot darker then the rest of her body... are you using a flash??

[doty]

Thanks for the input! Negative feedback are from my friends though..:cry:
Yeap using a flash..as for the darker spot its the PP effect..guess gotta correct it..

[kent andersen]

If this is youre first attempt, then you are defiently going to bring amazing shots very soon. These are extremly good for being someones first attempt to do a shot outside.

The only thing I would mention is that I would like to see the first two pictures a bit sharper around the eyes. Great shots, you should be proud of what you did.

[GorgeShooter]

I really like the first one except for the blurred foreground element on her right shoulder.

[Tyler's Mom]

Very Nice Shots and those are GREAT for first time. I'd Crop it down a bit there is alot of empty space above her head.

[doty]

Thanks everyone for the input! Very glad that my pieces are being appreciated! :D Will definitely try out the given advices!