1st time using Umbrellas please cc

[Domwolf]

I am looking for comments mainly on lights setup if i got it right so on......... I know there are many things wrong with poses and focus.....

But what i realy need is info on my light set up and what can i do better.....

Camera Canon XS
Iso 100
Shutter 1\160 on most
F\ i will post later oi forgot :(

Set up 1

Main Light camera left Refective Umbrella
Fill light Camera right Shoot Thru Umbrella
Backlight Vivitar285vh facing backdrop

http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs520.snc3/27271_1357187723350_1041206619_1109888_3736682_n.j pg

http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs500.snc3/27271_1357187843353_1041206619_1109889_2428755_n.j pg

Set up 2

Main Light Shoot Thru Umbrella moved to diffrent places
fill light it was outdoors
http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs500.ash1/27271_1357188563371_1041206619_1109897_567805_n.jp g

http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs500.snc3/27271_1357188843378_1041206619_1109900_4559215_n.j pg


Thanks All

[snyderman]

no pics showing.

dave

[Domwolf]

i fixed that snyderman thanks :)

[SpinningCone]

heh i think you need to get a steamer for your backdrop the wrinkles are seriously distracting ;-) second set looks better tho the contrast in the last one looks faded or flat around her face for some reason.

[paytonphoto]

Number three is definitely the best of the three IMO. When using wrinkled fabric you need to have your subject about 7 feet away from the background fabric to soften the wrinkle effect.

[Domwolf]

Thanks on the comments .... what you guys think on the lighting was it set up proper ? did i get the correct exposure ? Thanks again