Critique these..

[wayne53]

These were some of the people at my 4th of July Party..

http://premium1.uploadit.org/tylerwayne//shannonsmall.jpg

This shot came out way over exposed, but I tried to fix it :o. I'll post the original if someone wants to give it a better shot. I think it came out pretty good :)
http://premium1.uploadit.org/tylerwayne//sheelasmall.jpg

http://premium1.uploadit.org/tylerwayne//rachealsmall.jpg

..and a shot of my car :)
http://premium1.uploadit.org/tylerwayne//7-4-05006editsmall.jpg

-Tyler

[ryno4youth]

The second one could use a little fill flash, but i love them. Nice friends, nice car, and nice house. Keep shootin'!

[tim]

Yeah 2nd could use fill flash, and the person sprouting out of her head isn't freat. The necklace is out of focus in the first too. Not bad.

[Maureen Souza]

Love the 3rd one.....great facial expression!

[Hellashot]

#2 Needs shadows lightened a lot and could be a bit soft - sharpen it up. #3 - bright sunlight in someone's eyes isn't the best way to take a photograph of someone. A setting where you can see the person's eyes is best. She is squinting so much you can't see her eyes at all - just black.

[PhotosGuy]

Shots 1 & 3: GET DOWN to their level!
#2: What they said.
#4: I'd crop out all that driveway. Seen this?
A few Car Lighting Tips (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=70290)