Lets try that again

[audj33]

Any comments would be greatly appreciated

[tonydee]

You did well to balance the composition, albeit precariously - which probably makes it more dynamic and interesting. Lighting's a bit harsh in places, and dull in others. There's not a lot of depth in the subject matter... little sense of foreground vs mid vs background, so the eye's just scanning left to right, round to round, reinforced by the lack of a dominant subject.

Cheers,
Tony

[vk2gwk]

The way the picture displayed on my monitor I had to scroll from top to bottom. There is a lot happening in this picture and I agree with Tony that there is no particular poiunt that grabs the attention.

But by scrolling I discovered that there are in fact to images... the top and the bottom half. If cropped accordingly things "calm down" and are getting more interesting; especially the "top crop".