Cabin Fever

[philk54]

C&C please.

[mpistone]

Great story! I think I'd like less light on top for a bit of a moodier look, otherwise it's great :)

[philk54]

Thanks. I might try to soften the light a bit.

[RadAL]

crop the top part, don't need the upper negative space.

[philk54]

Thanks for the feedback. The idea of the light eminating from the globe was intended to portray all the opportunities that are waiting out there. I could easily crop enough of the upper portion to remove negative space and get rid of the blown out area, but still have the desired effect. As attached:

[mpistone]

I like the crop a bit more. It looks like you cooled the wb a bit too. Looks good!

[philk54]

Didn't adjust wb. I think eliminating hotspot at top gives that appearance. Thanks again for your input.

[Grimm75]

Soften the light, and turn the globe to get the rows of text out of the shot. Great idea though and much better than I could have done!

[philk54]

Thanks.