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elou31
14th of March 2010 (Sun), 22:57
please critique :)

thanks

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elou31
14th of March 2010 (Sun), 22:59
two more of one other person :)

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vk2gwk
14th of March 2010 (Sun), 23:20
It may be the make up, but in the first two the eyes are a bit funny - especially the left eye in the first shot. Other than that: nice and sharp and well lit. Only the skin tone.... Something is off there but I am not sure what.
Absolutely Fabulous
14th of March 2010 (Sun), 23:22
It may be the make up, but in the first two the eyes are a bit funny - especially the left eye in the first shot. Other than that: nice and sharp and well lit. Only the skin tone.... Something is off there but I am not sure what.

too smooth it looks.
juxtagirl
15th of March 2010 (Mon), 00:17
It looks like you may have used the high pass filter. I would go with a softer blend. As it is, it makes the eyes on the second model a bit garish.

The second photo on the first model is my favorite. Her legs look beautiful and graceful.
chomish
15th of March 2010 (Mon), 00:48
It may be the make up, but in the first two the eyes are a bit funny - especially the left eye in the first shot. Other than that: nice and sharp and well lit. Only the skin tone.... Something is off there but I am not sure what.

I agree.. Photo #1 of the second girl, her left eye looks like its about to fall out.
elou31
15th of March 2010 (Mon), 07:35
It looks like you may have used the high pass filter. I would go with a softer blend. As it is, it makes the eyes on the second model a bit garish.

The second photo on the first model is my favorite. Her legs look beautiful and graceful.

yes it is high pass filter and one question... is the composition ok or i need to make them more offset (law of thirds) ?

thanks for the comments :)
JRMott
15th of March 2010 (Mon), 18:13
IMO there is too much post processing. Then again, I'm not even a beginner when it comes to that stuff, but it looks too artificial to me.

I wouldn't worry about the rule of thirds. You don't always have to follow the rules.
JRMott
15th of March 2010 (Mon), 18:14
Also, I think the 2nd pic would look better if there were some separation between her head and her arm. Like, her elbow should be pointed out more.