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MrGibbage
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 09:55
Picture of my daughter. I really took some time composing this and setting it up (kinda going for that artsy-fartsy something). I don't know what it's really trying to say, but I thought it was cute anyway. C & C is welcome, because I would like to get better. What would you change here, if anything? Which one do you like better?

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cjsa
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 10:06
that's really cute
skade
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 10:11
Too cute!
BearLeeAlive
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 10:37
Great picture, that expression on the first pic is priceless.
Got a big smile outta me
Learner
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 10:39
they are both fantastic, but the expression on 1 is my favorite. Great work and worth the effort to set this up:)
lisa1969
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 10:46
Adorable pic! the only CC I would give is to have a less distracting background(perhaps have baby more in front the cupboards rather than the fridge with the magnets) and perhaps have the baby more in the foreground.
djonto
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 12:40
The first one is terrific and raised a smile here
tupe
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 13:13
Priceless!
tonytony
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 13:16
The first one is too precious...
Spots
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 16:23
You did the "artsy-fartsy something" great! I love the expression in the first one also. I also agree that the magnets are a little distracting but other than that I think it's perfect. Just remember to erase the brand name on the can if you are going to distribute the picture in any way. ;)


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ksmattfish
9th of July 2005 (Sat), 21:39
Normally I would agree that the background is too busy, but I think it works okay here. If it was a commercial shot a cleaner background would be nice, but as a family portrait/documentary shot I think it's wonderful. It's more of an environmental portrait.