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solitary
18th of March 2010 (Thu), 22:12
Sorry, it's not the drunken photos as some of you may expect!
I picked 3 of my favorites from the trip! Give me some CC please!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2713/4436238737_10610e546a_b.jpg
Kids playing baseball inside a building.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4060/4436743774_88daa16cb1_b.jpg
I quickly noticed a strong division in social class in Cuba, for example this man rummaging through garbage collecting bottles.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4002/4435956781_38786dd301_b.jpg
This photo was shot on our two hour drive to Havana, lots of interesting cars along on the way.

lundgrenj
19th of March 2010 (Fri), 00:55
#1 not bad, simple b&w might be better than this off sepia., the focus is on the frame, not the boy in the frame.

#2 Focus on garbage can not the man, too much DOF.

#3 best of the lot IMO, a story being told here.

JimMcrae
19th of March 2010 (Fri), 04:41
#1 is my favourite. I was in Cuba a number of years ago and one of the first things that struck me was how mad they are about their baseball. I think this shot tells a story of 'typical Cuban kids'. I like the sepia tone too.

#2 I also like with the guy raking the bins but agree with lundgrenj about the dof. Maybe a bit of fill light for the guy's face too?

#3 is okay, but my least favourite of the three.

Flo
19th of March 2010 (Fri), 09:58
#1, and agree about the sepia.try another hue perhaps?
The second is too contrasted, we lost his face.
#3.not so much....but for you it means something;)

mattaura
19th of March 2010 (Fri), 18:24
First one is really great, both technically and subject-wise. You captured the scene really well. The natural framing adds much to it.

DC5 Poe
19th of March 2010 (Fri), 23:32
All seem OOF to me