Tried lights and B&W

[CHARDUCK]

I seen something like this and wanted to give it a try.

[gonzogolf]

Nice lighting and composition. I'm not sure about the BW though, I keep thinking there is something missing in the shot. I think color might work better.

[CHARDUCK]

Here is color

[gonzogolf]

Now I'm back to thinking the BW is better, the redish highlight in the background on the left is distracting in color. If the background had been blacked out I think I would like the color better.

[smooth monkey]

B&W is better