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damov2
22nd of March 2010 (Mon), 13:59
Tell me what you think! does it work or not?
I lit the background behind the chrysanthemum with a yellow gel, then lit the flower from above with flash and homemade diffuser.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4004/4455102606_2f66bd8c10_b.jpg

TTk
22nd of March 2010 (Mon), 14:05
It works for me, excellent detail and colour, I like it...:D

longsight
22nd of March 2010 (Mon), 14:11
A very nice pic if it were mine i would crop the bottom and the left hand side of it .
So that the centre of the flower is in the bottom corner.

Still a nice pic though;)

snyderman
22nd of March 2010 (Mon), 14:53
I like it. Super 'soft' looking image. Nicely done.

dave

bianson
22nd of March 2010 (Mon), 14:56
Very nice!!

Rob Douglas
22nd of March 2010 (Mon), 20:41
I second longsight's crop suggestion. Other than that the lighting is great and the detail is spot on. Sharp too ;) great capture.

JayCee Images
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 01:16
Well done!

9941791
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 01:19
smooth.......nice

pelooyen
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 03:36
I like it too - again, concur with longsight in terms of cropping

Mhappy
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 09:39
beautiful!!

Chet
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 09:41
I like it. My suggestion would be to clone out the small spots and imperfections to make this a truly delicate and elegant shot.

Snydremark
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 11:53
I'll third the crop suggestion as that portion of the image is just a little too saturated and distracting. The center and out to the right you've really nailed, though!

damov2
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:28
Thanks everyone for the help! heres the crop.

corkneyfonz
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:30
I really like this. Fabulous capture.

Snydremark
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:42
YES! :)

FELINEDEBOURGES
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:45
I prefer the original crop now that I see both.

Rob Douglas
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 16:13
I like the crop.

vk2gwk
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 18:37
I like the uncropped version better. Nice colours and framing. Very good!