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9941791
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 01:32
After long time im submitting for cc,pls do that
1
http://i42.tinypic.com/2cngrc1.jpg
2,
http://i40.tinypic.com/fnsj1f.jpg
3,
http://i42.tinypic.com/28cegpg.jpg
4,
http://i42.tinypic.com/2qiz9jd.jpg

mattaura
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 02:07
#1 horizon is tilted. needs rotated clockwise. also could use a bit of sharpening, a tad soft. nice colors.
#2 sky and some of the water are blown out.
#3 i think the mid-tones are slightly too dark. if you adjust your middle level slider to the left just a tad that should correct it. could also use a light sharpen.
#4 needs rotated counter-clockwise

dcnats
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 07:53
watch the horizons, I think the sky in #1 and #3 look a little unnatural/overdone... I really like #2, I don't think the blown out sky detracts too much because you've got those tree branches taking up the negative space.

corkneyfonz
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:13
First is my favourite.

9941791
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:36
Thanks for the cc and it'S my learning period more cc will help me a lot

obnoxiousmom
23rd of March 2010 (Tue), 12:39
watch the horizons, I think the sky in #1 and #3 look a little unnatural/overdone... I really like #2, I don't think the blown out sky detracts too much because you've got those tree branches taking up the negative space.

This is the way i feel about it