New business cards - Some input please...

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http://j.imagehost.org/0677/front_1_copy.jpg

http://j.imagehost.org/0677/back_1_copy.jpg


My first set of cards only had the text you see here...but they were glossy black. I won't be doing that again.

These will be printed in flat white.

Are these presentable?

[tim]

Few thoughts:
- What does the picture add? It hides your business name. It's ok for an RE photographer, but you want people to look at your website, not your card.
- Mirror writing looks a bit silly
- Layout of the back of the card is poor. It's not balanced. I don't like the use of different colored fonts.
- The back should have your business name, maybe your location too.
- Not having your own domain makes you look really unprofessional. Get it and put your portfolio there, and use an email address at that domain.

Overall - start again - content and layout.

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Few thoughts:
- What does the picture add? It hides your business name. It's ok for an RE photographer, but you want people to look at your website, not your card.
- Mirror writing looks a bit silly
- Layout of the back of the card is poor. It's not balanced. I don't like the use of different colored fonts.
- The back should have your business name, maybe your location too.
- Not having your own domain makes you look really unprofessional. Get it and put your portfolio there, and use an email address at that domain.

Overall - start again - content and layout.


Thank you for some real advice.
:)

[tim]

You're welcome, but you'll find everyone will have a different opinion, of course!