Please CRITIQUE

[JuStDaVe]

Photo Comp I want to enter :- theme familly

what u think

http://www.justdavephotography.com/bella.jpg

[Ikinaa]

hmmm... joy seems to be on one side only here. She's got her hands i her pockets and not round the boy...
Then they key disturbs and the car in the upper right...
And it's IMO a bit dark, when playing with the levels, try to get more midtones...

But then again, the idea is good... try again...