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B.Miller
7th of April 2010 (Wed), 16:39
Had the pleasure of shooting one of my best friends wedding this past weekend. Still working on the edits, but wanted to share a couple while working on the rest. Enjoy!

1.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2789/4501174986_aa226754bc_b.jpg

2.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2796/4500543367_9d13de1128_b.jpg

3.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2784/4500540695_37c9aa0472_b.jpg

4. Dave is an avid outdoors man, so I wanted to add his lifestyle to the pictures.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4491676438_51586a5ee3_b.jpg

5.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4004/4500540151_9aab960b79_b.jpg

6.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2804/4501177124_5fe05b5319_b.jpg

7.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4033/4501176534_daea6c32a8_b.jpg

8.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2703/4494737313_8755cb19a2_b.jpg

Feel free to throw some critique out there if you want!

dche5390
7th of April 2010 (Wed), 18:49
A tad underexposed for all methinks.

#8 and 4 are fantastic. Plus it is so rare to see the groom smile naturally whilst looking lovingly into his bride's eyes.

Not keen on the fluro green and the busy OOF nature of the rings shot. Really not liking the green!

The purple in #1 is distracting me.

#6 could do with a tighter crop since its a "sneeky" shot. And un-tilt!

B.Miller
7th of April 2010 (Wed), 19:04
A tad underexposed for all methinks.

#8 and 4 are fantastic. Plus it is so rare to see the groom smile naturally whilst looking lovingly into his bride's eyes.

Not keen on the fluro green and the busy OOF nature of the rings shot. Really not liking the green!

The purple in #1 is distracting me.

#6 could do with a tighter crop since its a "sneeky" shot. And un-tilt!
Thank you so much for your kind words.

The neon green is from the arrow that I used for the outdoors man feel.

I agree with number 1, I'd never tried it and wanted to do something diff to see how it turned out.

And I'll definitely try a tighter crop on #6. Thank you for taking time to critique!

B.Miller
8th of April 2010 (Thu), 05:44
Only 1 person to comment in 13 hours and over 100 views? :(

TeeJay
8th of April 2010 (Thu), 06:50
1. Sorry, this doesn't work for me, looks too much like what it is - a snapshot.

2. A tad too contrasty for my liking - colours need to be softer (IMHO).

3. LOVE number 3 - beautiful natural smile - great capture!

4. This made me smile. Nice photo - would have preferred if you hadn't cropped the right hand side of the photo though. (toes of left boot)

5. The OOF background is far too distracting for me, maybe try cropping in closer.

6. Colours and focus appear off. If it is going to be left in this format, then it also needs straightening (top of door frame not horizontal) TBH I wouldn't use it.

7. Really nice angle, but would have preferred the exposure of number 8 - where you have more detail in the Brides headdress.

8. The kiss doesn't seem "real" - I'm sure it was, but the Groom screwing his eyes up makes it appear "forced" rather than a natural kiss.

TJ

B.Miller
8th of April 2010 (Thu), 08:02
I'm a big fan of Emin Kuliyev and was trying to achieve the look of one of his brilliant shots in #1. Guess I should leave the brilliance to him huh? lol