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neocastillo
14th of July 2005 (Thu), 09:56
This isn't really a photograph per say. It's a culmination of a few stock photographs. Adjusted and edited in Photoshop. I'm not too sure if the text is too dark. I tried to make it dark as to not take away form the image.

I would really welcome any comments, and please don't hold back. I can take it.

MattL
15th of July 2005 (Fri), 03:49
Hi there.

I like your conecpt, and think the final product is rather polished and well done - just a couple things pop out in my mind.

The shadow of the cross is (IMO) completely the wrong angle to be coming from the sun shown.

I like the grass, and the sunset, however im not to keen on the black band between the two.
Perhaps some seperation of the grass and black might help - the grass sort of just stops.

I think the text is effective, and not too dark - I would maybe try making the top text bold, or one step brighter. The curl ontop of the h is a tad hard to see. I kept thinking it was a red mark unrelated to the text.

The border and framing are excellent and suit the picture well.

Well done - my objective answer is that I like it.

(above is all IMHO)