My first collage

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This is my first attempt at collages. I would love some feedback on it. Shoot me straight, I don't like sugar & spice....

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oops! maybe this is better

[Big John]

Is there anyway you can make this bigger? Try resizing to an 800 x 600 pixel size.

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I am not too good with this resizing stuff

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i will try again

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i think I got it now

[Big John]

Much better! I can see the collage now and i must say I love your photographs. Was this being used as a promo piece? Are you using Photoshop to create this?

[GyRob]

looks fine to me.
Rob.

[Rigrider]

The collage itself looks good. From a Design perspective I've got this:

1) You really need a differant font on "Christina Reid." The one you're using just dosen't fit with the rest of the piece.

2) If this is a personal promo piece than ignore this, but if what you're showing off is Christina, then you should really decrease the weight you've given to your company name, and increase the weight you've given to Christina's name.

Just something to think about. Hope this helps.

L8r,

[exposingmyself]

i think the individual images are good but there's too much going on

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1) You really need a differant font on "Christina Reid." The one you're using just dosen't fit with the rest of the piece.

2) If this is a personal promo piece than ignore this, but if what you're showing off is Christina, then you should really decrease the weight you've given to your company name, and increase the weight you've given to Christina's name.

Just something to think about. Hope this helps.

L8r,

I had the same font as my name, her mom requested the other because it is used by the school. I am o.k. with that. I thought about using the blue in her uniform for that. I decided against it because the ad is already so busy.

This is an ad for the football program in our community. It will be one of the 4 full color ads in the book. Two of the other 3 also have my name on them. I also plan to do a duplicate of this without my name for her to put in her room.

Thanks for the opinion! It really helps to have honest critique. I am already re working it for my personal use. I am going to move the cowgirl and put a full shot of the car in and re work some of the photos that I scrunched up ( may even take a few out).

THANKS AGAIN!!

[awp]

looks fine to me.
Rob.

Thanks!!

[awp]

Much better! I can see the collage now and i must say I love your photographs. Was this being used as a promo piece? Are you using Photoshop to create this?


Thanks !! It is an ad for local football program. Yes, Photoshop 7 and Elements 3.