Another Bridal Shoot. C+C Appreciated

[ahobden]

1.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4019/4484733974_9dfe6a72af_o.jpg

2.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4052/4484733576_3c470a7d7e_o.jpg

3.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4484733322_40a8af7bc2_o.jpg

4.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2755/4484081279_f66bd7b8ae_o.jpg

Thanks in advance for your time.

[auroraskye]

The light in these is fantastic.. and what a gorgeous bride. Here is my C&C

1 - I like this but I wish there wasn't a finger crop.

2 - I would have liked to seen this at a lower angle. I like the tilt of her head, but the hand crop feels a little weird, and I just would have liked to feel a little closer to her.

3 - I love the composition here, and although I am not outright opposed to one eye being out of focus, I think it would be improved if it weren't QUITE so out of focus, say if you shot it at 2.2 instead of 1.8.

4 - I like this, but you might want to clone out the person in the mirror, lol.

They all seem a little cool and magenta as well, just a hair.
I am sure she loves the shots.. she is a stunner, I could shoot her all day.

[ahobden]

Hi, thanks for your comments.

I guess I need to pay more attention to the detail, like the crop of the finger and the person in the mirror !! I do tend to get carried away when photographing and then not be as careful as I should. Your kind of feed back is great for re-enforcing stuff like this. I really do appreciate it.

I think I'll also go and get my monitor calibrated !!

Cheers

Adam

[sctbiggs]

finger crop kills me all the time. it's amazing what you so easily forget when you are out there doing it.

like 4 the best. didn't notice the stalker in the mirror at first. funny.

[Joelene]

I agree with Aurora 100% and suggest you notice the little things when shooting. Such as the hanger ribbon sticking out of her dress in #1 the little piece of the couch sticking up in 2 and the dude in the mirror.

nice work, beautiful girl too.

[Michelle Brooks Photography]

Ditto on all the aboves. Beautiful images & girl! You done yourself proud!

[jho288]

agree to the comments too. i still love the images especially the last one! a closer one of the last one would of been great!