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kinghong1970
3rd of May 2010 (Mon), 17:33
Matt aka vmdc, also from PoTN was asking about logo designing services so i thought i'd give him a couple of drafts...

i've talked with him and ok'd about asking you guys see which direction you like best...

after getting some feedbacks from Matt in the font selections page, here's what i have so far...

i know the blades thing and the camera front silhouette is overdone... so let me get your feedbacks on these...

First Group...
http://lh4.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S99NdcIHEAI/AAAAAAAAAsM/qL7MlFk6ukk/s720/Camera%20Left%20View%20Logos.jpg

do you guys see what it is? took a while for Matt to get it... guess the idea failed... lol?

Second Group
http://lh4.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S99NeLns58I/AAAAAAAAAsQ/nExFF36aaV0/Camera%20Rt%20View%20Logos.jpg

maybe the front element is tad much... takes away from the "c"

Block Letters
http://lh4.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S99Ne-UlL2I/AAAAAAAAAsU/EuHm-3T98ns/s720/Encapsulated%20Logo.jpg

Custom Font Renditions
http://lh3.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S99NfhZ11mI/AAAAAAAAAsY/N3KaWRjbUb8/s720/Custom%20Font%20Logo.jpg

thanks for the input...

nonameowns
3rd of May 2010 (Mon), 17:50
refine the first image. Tweak it a bit and it will be a excellent logo. Good job!

Eric
3rd of May 2010 (Mon), 19:03
refine the first image. Tweak it a bit and it will be a excellent logo. Good job!


I like the last one...haha.

Play with the colors some more.

Todd Lambert
3rd of May 2010 (Mon), 19:12
I think the 3rd one of the 4th group is the strongest... honestly, I don't think anyone will "get" the camera body reference in the first two.

James Robert Gratiot
3rd of May 2010 (Mon), 20:42
I think the 3rd one of the 4th group is the strongest... honestly, I don't think anyone will "get" the camera body reference in the first two.
Gotta agree with Todd. If I didn't know better, I'd think it was a hammer.

kinghong1970
3rd of May 2010 (Mon), 21:22
thank you very much... i have to admit, i had most fun in the first 2 groups... but there's something missing in the "flow" and the 2 elements of the logo does not blend well, (Lf Heavy in First Group, "Hammertime" in 2nd group...)

the 3rd is nice... but a bit plain imo... and again, too tight.. .i'll try putting more negative space on it...

4th group is fun as well... but feels too corporate...

anywhoo, i really appreciate your comments... wow... once you step away from it and look back after couple of hours, you kinda see new perspective...


i'll post some modifications shortly...

cheers!

mhart008
4th of May 2010 (Tue), 09:26
I personally like the third and fourth groups, clean, easy to read. I also like to think of other applications of the logo. The Third would make a great stamp. The Fourth does have a corporate look but is is very clean and professional.

HappySnapper90
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 09:02
Avoid trying to incorporate a camera into the logo. Photographers will know what an SLR camera looks like from the side but many potential clients will not.

I prefer the first of the "custom font" ones (with a normal "c"), but with "imagery" under the mdc - without color. Why have the "d" in color? Why should attention be drawn to that letter? There's probably not need for emphasizing that letter. So just leave it all the same coloring.

Aaron Peabody
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 11:39
Photographers will know what an SLR camera looks like from the side but many potential clients will not.

And sometimes not even then. I stared at it for a couple of minutes trying to figure out what that fat hammer was doing on the side of the logo...

P.S. I like the first two in group three and The third and fifth in the last group.

kinghong1970
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 12:55
Thanks for your valuable inputs...

Matt is beginning to like the camera silhouette and so i've revised a bit and tried to make it a bit more obvious... (including the red ring... he has red ring fever atm... lol)

Top Silhouette Variants
http://lh5.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S-GwJW7m7bI/AAAAAAAAAtQ/V7JseE79d2o/s720/Camera%20Silouette%20Top%20View.jpg
looks too much like a spaceship...


Side Silhouette Variants
http://lh4.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S-GwwrC8s5I/AAAAAAAAAtc/zlaqToJ08Sc/s720/Camera%20Side%20Logo%20Variants.jpg
looks a bit like a spaceship from side? lol?

Camera Lens?
http://lh4.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S-GwKEIy7TI/AAAAAAAAAtU/Yj57WQyPpzU/Lens%20Logo.jpg
damn, that's huge! not my fav...

Enclosed Logo Variants
http://lh6.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S-GwLHPApbI/AAAAAAAAAtY/Uk79jnLBbRc/s720/Revised%20Encapsulated%20Logo%20Variatons.jpg
this is growing on me... not too corporate...

again, your cc is much appreciated!

thanks!

MATT! chime in anytime bro!

Michael Cheddar
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:01
I like your work, and how many options you've made for him. your doing great :)
btww, im not a huge fan of cursive fonts, I find the blocky arial/times/verdona (easy to read) type of fonts more attractive :-)

kinghong1970
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:02
hmm... i kinda like this set... not too boring, not too corporate... and the Red line works well too...

http://lh5.ggpht.com/_w9jT_GnjZSc/S-GyeDKTEJI/AAAAAAAAAtk/hTjK00mzTyw/s720/Text%20Only%20Variants.jpg

kinghong1970
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:03
I like your work, and how many options you've made for him. your doing great :)
btww, im not a huge fan of cursive fonts, I find the blocky arial/times/verdona (easy to read) type of fonts more attractive :-)

Thanks Michael... i'm just popping em out as i get some "inspirations"... lol?

it starts off one idea and it branches off... bkgnd variants, color variants, font variants...

maybe when Matt is satisfied, he'll post here...

hahaha...

Eric
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:04
Well, again, I like last one of the last group but I would change the script font to that of the first one in the last group. Not a fan of the camera silhouette or the lens. sorry.

Clean and simple, can't go wrong.

This is in regards to your second listing, not a fan of the third listing.....

Eric
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:06
The red line makes it look like IMDC Imagery

kinghong1970
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:06
Well, again, I like last one of the last group but I would change the script font to that of the first one in the last group. Not a fan of the camera silhouette or the lens. sorry.

Clean and simple, can't go wrong.

This is in regards to your second listing, not a fan of the third listing.....

i hear ya... the camera icon can be a bit too cliche-ish... and it looks like a spaceship... maybe if an older body... hmm....

i like the enclosed one in either one of the fonts work... the last batch, i have to say, is my favorite... reminiscent of the red ring and flows nicely... good balance...

damn, i'm posting these way too big... lol
sorry bout that folks.

MikePrattPhotography
5th of May 2010 (Wed), 13:27
second to last of the first set for me ;)