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27th of May 2010 (Thu), 22:20
this is my first portrait session. let me know what you think! I shoot all sports.
28th of May 2010 (Fri), 09:19
so I am sorta bummed that no one has told me good or bad about this photo yet.
I would love to know what I could do to improve. like I said this is my first portrait session. I shoot mainly sports.
28th of May 2010 (Fri), 09:30
Sorry, but the WB is way off, and the hue is pretty green/yellow. The light is very harshly shown in this one,her face and chest area are really hot.losing details in features. The composition is very nice though, and her smile is a winner. You just need to get the lighting and WB under control;) Different time of day, will eliminate the harshly lit areas.
28th of May 2010 (Fri), 10:28
thanks alot! thats what I was looking for! ill do another edit when i have time and try and post it again.
28th of May 2010 (Fri), 11:56
The orange and green combination is great, but yes, the WB is way off. More importantly, the focus missed her face and hit her waist area.
28th of May 2010 (Fri), 12:08
I agree with the others, the composition is good and I like the colors, and of course the smile is great. But I would like to see her eyes, and with the lighting on her face thats not possible. Great attempt, keep it up!
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