Just Waiting

[josephlbeattie]

C&C Needed. Just waiting for his younger sister's soccer practice to end. Shot in the dark at the edge of the field. Sharpened and noise removed. ISO 400, 1/13 F3.5

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[Dimitry]

I like the mood of the shot! The graininess adds to it also. :)

[Malta]

you really caught the mood in this one, i love it.

Why so much space at the back.

Magda

[ricohcam01]

I really like to shot. I am a mood person. Get the feel from the mood.
On the comp side. I wonder if it would be better if you gave some
space on the left of the shot? Kinda like breathing room.

Keep up the great work.

[josephlbeattie]

Appreciate the comments. Mood is what I was trying to capture. On the left side there is a another person who has been cropped out. You can just see part of their gray jacket.

[PEACHMAN]

Like it a lot...waiting,, what I spent most of my youth doing....you have the mood and The dark setting is really part of the mood...wonderful !

[davepgh1]

Captured the mood, like the shot, now give that kid an ice cream. It does look like you could lose some of the right side, maybe an inch.

[ghettoFOBulous]

Perhaps I'm just being picky, but i'd prefer the boy be a bit more centered. Unless you wanted to leave all that gap. Or perhaps the space is infront of the boy so he's staring into empty space. Good mood though.