park bench

Bill Pham · 27th of May 2008 (Tue)

is this shot any good? i think there something missing but no sure what it is.

Bill

LeuceDeuce · 28th of May 2008 (Wed)

It's not that there's anything missing for me, but as soon as I opened the image I had to refresh my page to make sure it didn't load wrong. You have some kind of artifact in the center of the image that looks like a stutter. Was this image stitched together or do the layers not line up?

Sonic Infidel · 28th of May 2008 (Wed)

Try cropping some of the sky out. This will make it follow the rule of thirds. (Generally, you want the horizon on the imaginary 1/3 or 2/3 mark.)

Flo · 28th of May 2008 (Wed)

Quote:

Originally Posted by LeuceDeuce

It's not that there's anything missing for me, but as soon as I opened the image I had to refresh my page to make sure it didn't load wrong. You have some kind of artifact in the center of the image that looks like a stutter. Was this image stitched together or do the layers not line up?

I saw that blur LD.thought maybe it was done retouching?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sonic Infidel

Try cropping some of the sky out. This will make it follow the rule of thirds. (Generally, you want the horizon on the imaginary 1/3 or 2/3 mark.)

Bill knows

LeuceDeuce · 28th of May 2008 (Wed)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flo

I saw that blur LD.thought maybe it was done retouching?

It very well could be. That's why I suggested the mismatched layers. Perhaps a different treatment was applied to the lawn, and then the layer was accidentally shifted without noticing it. It happens to the rest of us

27th of May 2008 (Tue)	#1
Bill Pham Cream of the Crop Join Date: May 2007 Location: St. Paul MN Posts: 5,101 IMAGE EDITING OK	park bench is this shot any good? i think there something missing but no sure what it is. Bill __________________ winning is fun and second is for loser I got Mitch hook on wide angle Gear list http://billpham.smugmug.com/

28th of May 2008 (Wed)	#2
LeuceDeuce Goldmember Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Vancouver BC, Canada Posts: 2,362 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: park bench It's not that there's anything missing for me, but as soon as I opened the image I had to refresh my page to make sure it didn't load wrong. You have some kind of artifact in the center of the image that looks like a stutter. Was this image stitched together or do the layers not line up? __________________ my website: Light & Shadow my flickr

28th of May 2008 (Wed)	#3
Sonic Infidel Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Springfield, IL Posts: 485 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: park bench Try cropping some of the sky out. This will make it follow the rule of thirds. (Generally, you want the horizon on the imaginary 1/3 or 2/3 mark.) __________________ -------------- Body: EOS 400D Lenses:70-200mm f2.8L, 50mm f/1.4, 17-85mm IS, 430EX

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