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Nov 09, 2010 19:26 |  #1

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Could there be a better crop of this, or what do you think of it? The original included some sky, but the sky was blown out so I cropped in just the trees.

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Nov 09, 2010 20:17 |  #2

I like it but IMO it needs some sky or other contrast


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Nov 10, 2010 11:37 |  #3

Ok, I thought the same thing as you, that it needed something else. Well I played with the Raw file, and here's a little bit of clouds that I recovered, I desaturated the sky because it didn't look right with the colors.

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Nov 10, 2010 11:56 |  #4

Hi,

Great photo and I like the sky desaturated. when I look at it I find my eyes going straight to the two brightest trees (just off centre to the right) and then they are pulled to the right of the image and the other trees. So i would crop some off the right and so the brighter coloured trees are towards the edge of the crop, take a fraction off the bottom and lose some of the sky.

Just my opinion of course! :)


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Nov 10, 2010 13:17 |  #5

Wow, I like this, fantastic capture coupled with great pp work.


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Nov 10, 2010 14:29 |  #6

Very nice, I like the mixing of the scattered colorful with the grayish trees. Great shot.




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Nov 10, 2010 14:31 |  #7

I like the crop




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Nov 10, 2010 16:42 |  #8

rioni wrote in post #11260456external link
I like the crop

Any reason why? Thanks.

unless that was sarcasm lol, just realized the image was cached in my browser so I could see it in the first post but others couldn't...edit nvm!


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Nov 10, 2010 16:44 |  #9

I like the colors and texture of the crop. The sky is blown out and composition doesn't work on that one IMO.

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Any reason why? Thanks.




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Nov 10, 2010 16:50 |  #10

rioni wrote in post #11261245external link
I like the colors and texture of the crop. The sky is blown out and composition doesn't work on that one IMO.

Interesting, thanks for the input all!


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Nov 10, 2010 16:59 |  #11

They sky makes it work much better


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Nov 10, 2010 19:32 |  #12

totally agree - it's beautiful. looks like a painting - I sometimes can't tell what's more beautiful - canvas or the real thing! but you've got a great looking shot - something I'd hang in my living room =)


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Nov 11, 2010 06:57 |  #13

yoyodunno wrote in post #11255699 (external link)
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Could there be a better crop of this, or what do you think of it? The original included some sky, but the sky was blown out so I cropped in just the trees.

Yes...you didn't leave any headroom above the two most prominent trees.


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Nov 11, 2010 15:08 |  #14

im a noob and im wondering how yor able to select certain objects like you did to the sky, and just work on that area? Im getting familiar with GIMP




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Nov 11, 2010 17:02 |  #15

EvenBid50 wrote in post #11267074external link
im a noob and im wondering how yor able to select certain objects like you did to the sky, and just work on that area? Im getting familiar with GIMP

With Gimp you could select an area using the free select tool, and draw around the area you want to change. You could also use the quickmask tool(it's at the bottom left of the screen) and draw around which area you want to select. Then to desaturate just go to Colors>Hue-Saturation. I think there's a Gimp thread around here somewhere. But for my photo, I mainly used Bibble which is a Raw processing tool, and it makes it really easy to make adjustments to any color, or any selection.


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