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Old 1st of June 2012 (Fri)   #1
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late evening. tried to get the noise down as much as I could. note, that there's a lot of small rain drops as well.

p.s. un unreleated note - why, when I save the pic as 147kb, photo manager of this forum always adds up 3-5 kb to the size of the file?
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Tonality, framing & comp. are fabulous. I wish it were a little closer, wider.
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Overall I like it. I think the texture with the rain on the glass along with the suited looking guy behind the glass....along with her poncho... and other shapes to the right...make it a very nice image. Good eye!
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forum is adding it's own filing system numbers.....
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Thanks, guys!

///btw - another reason to wish for a better camera - rain. ech.
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I also like the loneliness implied in this shot, especially with the people indoors apparently oblivious to the person out in the rain.
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Fantastic.
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totally awesome shot (no I'm not 16 years old). I like the composition and the real clincher is the contrast between the woman on the bench and the counter customer inside.

Museum quality if you ask me.
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thanks! it makes you work harder, think more : ]
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Crop in,.outside corners are distracting and not needed
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sorry, but I will completely disagree with you on that one.
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If you cropped out the sign on the left it would draw more attention to the woman and the inside people; plus if you cropped out the rain-shield over her it would accentuate the rain, and it would eliminate the large white portion of a letter in the upper right corner. I think this would improve the drama of the scene.
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...and also I would loose all the reason she is sitting there. now - she's waiting for the bus. after cropping - she's sitting somewhere near some mystic glass under the rain. why would she be sitting somewhere in the rain [if she's not a bitcrazy or smthn] for no apparent reason? by cropping I would just lose the story.
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Very unusual I normally don't like busy photos but this appeals to me. Good snap
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p.s. un unreleated note - why, when I save the pic as 147kb, photo manager of this forum always adds up 3-5 kb to the size of the file?
Maybe a difference between reporting size as 147*1000 or 147*1024 bytes.

147*(1024-1000) is a difference of 3528 bytes.
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