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Mar 09, 2014 20:48 |  #1

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Mar 10, 2014 00:19 |  #2

Very nice processing. I would remove some of the blemishes and even out the skin a little. The highlight on the nose piercing is a little distracting as well. The lighting is great and the colors complement her skin tone. Good job!


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Mar 10, 2014 15:55 |  #3

I agree. I would soften out the skin a little so it's more even and perhaps remove the white dot from her nose.

What kind of lighting did you use for this shot, if you don't mind me asking? =)




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Mar 10, 2014 16:58 |  #4

Lighting is a 600EX-RT into a SMDV Diffuser 60.


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Mar 10, 2014 17:03 |  #5

great shot, would clone/heal some of those pores and blemishes, otherwise this image is perf!


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Mar 10, 2014 17:26 |  #6

Thank you very much, pstyle1. =) I have the flash, I'll have to look into that diffuser.




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Mar 16, 2014 17:30 |  #7

Really like the lighting and her strong, confident expression. Her right eye looks a bit darker than the left eye, especially the white of the eye. The more I study it, the more it gives a sort of unbalanced appearance. Easily corrected and nothing a "normal person" would notice. :)


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Mar 17, 2014 16:36 |  #8

Nice catch, didn't notice it myself... probably an editing error on my part.

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Really like the lighting and her strong, confident expression. Her right eye looks a bit darker than the left eye, especially the white of the eye. The more I study it, the more it gives a sort of unbalanced appearance. Easily corrected and nothing a "normal person" would notice. :)


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Mar 18, 2014 16:48 |  #9

pstyle1 wrote in post #16765523external link
Nice catch, didn't notice it myself... probably an editing error on my part.

Thanks for the feedback. I have almost no experience with portraits but have been doing some studying and reading trying to learn, so details such as facial symmetry are on my mind right now. I would have never thought about things like that in the past. In fact, I specifically came to the People forum to see what tips I could pick up. (I usually hang out on Post Processing and Printing.) I really appreciated the chance to study your work. :)


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