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I think I like it better with the woman cropped out. She stands out just a bit too much.
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i agree,the kids suite the photo but the lady doesn't fit,very cool photo,post it again with the change if u decide to change it
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Works better with just the kids.
3rd time looks the best to me. i like the 2x3 crop the best
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3rd one is the best. I could see this being used as an ad.
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Feb 01, 2016 09:39 as a reply to Martin Dixon's post |
The last crop is the best one for the reasons stated before.
Illegitimi non carborundum --- as they said in Roman times ---
crop or clone out the bigger kid. he looks awkward. try cloning first, that way you can keep that negative space. plus it tells a better story with just 1 lonely little boy staring into it
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I like the first image best, the woman helps the composition, you could have three people ranging from strong interest, mild interest and dis-interest, the scale of the image works better I think, as you crop the colored circle starts to dominate
Definitely better without the woman (post #7 is the best imho). I might try cloning out the sign that the larger boy is looking at. The lettering looks like a smudge on the wall and is distracting.
Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
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