Thoughts on this image?
I love it.
Joined Oct 2013
London, Paris, NY
Nice effect. Beautiful model.
Cream of the Crop
Joined Jan 2010
Remember what the DorMouse said.....feed your head.
Joined May 2008
Post has been edited over 2 years ago by paintedlotus.
She's lovely, and I like the pose and the lighting. The post is pretty heavy handed for my taste though. Maybe take her skin work down by, oh, say 50% at least as a starting point.
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Stunning, Great composition and lighting. i don't think there is too much.
Stunning image Ezra.
For me there are too many competing elements in the photo - the nails and bracelets, the necklace, and the processing of the face seem at odds. The angle of the head, combined with the top of the hair being cut off makes it look oversize or distorted. The way the elbows are cut off makes the pose look like it could be of three people (look at the image and imagine the model's arms are extended straight out, and that two others are placing their hands on her hips) There's something odd about the outside corner of her right eye, and even the part in her hair looks wrong; did she have a weave? The bustline of the dress is offset from her breasts (my wife pointed that out), and the face looks very flat. And the last point, about the fingernails again, is that they draw too much attention to her hands, and they aren't really that attractive in this pose.
Feb 02, 2016 13:20 as a reply to paintedlotus's post |
Sorry for the late reply. This was taken for an album release and the edit was intentional
Love it and such a fantastic model. Nice crop. I think it's bit too sharp at this resolution and the background is uneven for my taste. Nit picking though.
Joined Feb 2016
I love it. If it's the magazine look you're going for then it's not over worked.
Portrait and fashion photographer.
Cream of the Crop
Joined Mar 2011
WHOA!! I wasn't expecting that!
Thing that reaaaaaaly bothers me is that her lips are to sharp cornered. Like someone drew them on with a ruler.
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