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Jun 05, 2017 08:18 |  #1

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Jun 25, 2017 21:20 |  #2

To me this looks like you pumped the shadows too high? Nice shot tho, would like to see it with the blacks not so pumped.


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Jun 26, 2017 04:18 |  #4

You're on the mask tool there...


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Jun 26, 2017 06:55 |  #5

Not sure where you're going with this..... Are you talking about me adjusting the tone curve? Maybe?


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Jun 26, 2017 19:26 |  #6

What I was saying is that it looks like you really pumped the shadows. This is fine to do of course (it's your photo!), however I'd like to see the original shot just for my own satisfaction.

There's no obligation for you to show it (again, it's your photo!), however that first screen shot you posted is of the mask tool selected in LR, not the Develop module as a whole. :)


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Jun 26, 2017 20:10 |  #7

That's the only editing I did.


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Jun 26, 2017 20:36 |  #8

Ok cool. No worries :)


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Jun 26, 2017 21:49 |  #9

Shaun, I think Benon is referring to the darks in your image.
They have a slight "grey fogginess" to them, which can simply be fixed via PP.

Personally I'd like a little more punch from the image, as I really like the comp.

Happy to do a quick edit to show what I mean, but only if your okay with that?




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