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Chris.R
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Nov 06, 2017 13:07 |  #16

Well it's her eyeliner so I assume she wants to look a bit odd! In which case she should love it. Linkedin isn't quite the boardroom wall. Maybe still lose the frizz top right?




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Nov 06, 2017 13:25 |  #17

I think the depth of field issue is a very subjective. I like the shallower depth of field and, frankly, I have no interest whatsoever in in-focus ears. The main features, the ones that convey character and personality, are bang in focus. I can understand why others think differently.

I'm not sure about taking down the exposure by half a stop because it would tend to crush the colour in her hair. She is pale skinned and that's fine.

I don't get the eye-liner at all ... but my opinions carry no weight when it comes to make-up and fashion. If the subject wants to look that way, that's the way to make her look.

Overall, I like it.


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Nov 06, 2017 13:44 |  #18

Makeup can be contentious, when the person applied it in tungsten light and you use flash. The liner/skin tone contrast may not be what she intended. Did she intend it to look more or less "incongruous" than it does?

Good point about the hair.




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Nov 06, 2017 15:01 |  #19

Here is me trying again. I did bring it down about 0.30 of a stop, fixed her tooth, cleaned up the hair and generally retouched it.

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Nov 06, 2017 15:05 |  #20

Here are the shadows brought a little bit up so as not to crush them in the hair.

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Nov 06, 2017 15:15 |  #21

Yes, better.:-) (I can only appreciate it if I hold a hand in front of the Tipp-Ex)




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Nov 06, 2017 15:18 |  #22

Chris.R wrote in post #18490172 (external link)
Yes, better.:-) (I can only appreciate it if I hold a hand in front of the Tipp-Ex)

LOL, I had to google Tipp-Ex! :lol:


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Nov 06, 2017 16:13 as a reply to post 18490042 |  #23

Nice work.

If your friend has second thoughts about her eyeliner for the purpose, some careful cloning at less than full opacity will do wonders.


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