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Mar 29, 2018 02:48 |  #1

Guys. Good news :)


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Mar 29, 2018 10:21 |  #2

I love the way you composed this image. If there was any more of the scene in any direction, it wouldn't be as good as it is now.

One thing I noticed about the image is the way it is balanced. Her right shoulder is a bit higher than her left shoulder. . The right shoulder is also brighter than her left shoulder. . This gives a little more tonal value to the left side of the frame ....... but then her left hand and fingers balance that out by giving tonal value to the right side of the frame.

One thing I've noticed in this image and other images of Zane are her hands and fingers - they are so long and slender, which I find to be an unbelievably attractive asset. . I wonder if there would be a way to shoot her that places visual emphasis on her hands and fingers, hence drawing attention to one of her most alluring qualities. . Perhaps holding a cigarette or .........


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Mar 29, 2018 13:03 |  #3

It's been a while but I'm enjoying seeing growth in people's work. As Tom mentioned she has beautiful hands .. perhaps experiment with placing in a different way. Sue Bryce has a good video on hand placement. The crop is different.. makes me want to look at her nose instead of her eyes for some reason. Overall lovely model and work, as always with your signature style.


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Mar 29, 2018 14:26 |  #4

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You got married? :)

I made this a Best Of because it is unconventional, captivating, and interesting. When you break the conventional rules of composition so well, it is worth a prize.


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Mar 29, 2018 16:53 |  #5

Hohoo! Sweet! I'll drink for that in foreseeable future! And the good news was, that Zane is liked over here at CC forum :D

Tom! I couldn't even imagine a possibility you will not mention her long legs and arms - I still remember your comment on that one pic from the kitchen :D And you are spot on with that toning there!

I will surely shoot her another [third] time somewhere in the future - then we'll see.

Angela - I'll check it out ;]


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Mar 30, 2018 11:44 |  #6

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Tom! I couldn't even imagine a possibility you will not mention her long legs and arms - I still remember your comment on that one pic from the kitchen :D And you are spot on with that toning there!

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Well, everyone notices her spectacularly long legs! . So I didn't think it necessary to reiterate the obvious ..... particularly since those legs weren't part of this particular photo.

However, fewer people ever notice fingers and hands, even when they are as exquisite as Zane's ..... and so I thought that mentioning them here may cause others to take notice of something they otherwise might not really see. . Very few women have super-long, slender fingers like Zane has ..... they are truly a rarity.


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Mar 30, 2018 16:32 |  #7

Thomas. Dug this up just for you, my man!


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Mar 31, 2018 19:15 |  #8

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This one would be even better if you were not in trouble with her. <G>


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Apr 01, 2018 01:39 as a reply to  @ AZGeorge's post |  #9

I did not get it :]


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Apr 01, 2018 02:30 |  #10

Not much more to say: I agree fully with Tom.
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Apr 01, 2018 14:22 |  #11

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I did not get it :]

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Apr 02, 2018 04:40 |  #12

Hahah! Also, apparently, he's a bit on the slow side :D


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