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Vanessa & JP - need opinion

 
Ferdinand
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Dec 29, 2004 03:29 |  #1

Hello Fellow Photogs, I am looking for inputs from you all for these photos which I have taken of a couple of friends 2 weekends ago. I look forward to your inputs, thanks very much.

#1
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/CRW_5361R4​_w.jpgexternal link

#2
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/CRW_5352_w​.jpgexternal link

#3
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/CRW_5312_w​.jpgexternal link

#4
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/_MG_5346R4​_w.jpgexternal link

#5
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/_MG_5314_w​.jpgexternal link

#6
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/CRW_5211R4​_w.jpgexternal link

#7
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/CRW_5315_w​.jpgexternal link

#8
http://mcauslan.force1​37.com/misc/CRW_5242_w​.jpgexternal link

Best regards,
Ferdinand


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feenomenal
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Dec 29, 2004 06:54 |  #2

I really liked #6 and #8 personally. Good job!




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Pekka
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Dec 29, 2004 07:41 |  #3

#3 and #7 are my favourites. They are all very good, you had good models there! Quick comments:

#1 suffers a bit from flare and wrong WB (it may be sunset but viewer does not know it). Messy background.
#2 is very good, the grey area on top is odd (post processed with curves?).
#3 is very good, although his expression is a bit hesitant and lazy :)
#4 is ok, but the background choice makes it somehow "ordinary".
#5 is warm. Problem is that half of his face is covered by her hair.
#6 is technically not very good (salvaged from RAW using curves?) Good pose, bad background.
#7 is very good. Could use a bit more saturation?
#8 ordinary pose with some nervousness, blown highlight on cheek, odd WB.

Also, in some photos you could have hidden the fact the girl is shorter, using angles and positions.


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marie
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Dec 29, 2004 08:06 as a reply to Pekka's post |  #4

I hadn't seen Pekka's choices when I decided #3 and #7 were my pick of those which I liked best of all the shots Ferdinand

a lot of the pictures may be over sharpened ( or something ? )
which makes them seem 'edgy' at the edges
( but maybe just to me)

the couple seem 'enclosed' by the frame a little too much in some of the shots ?

:confused:

however, I do know they will appreciate these lovely photographs :)


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Ferdinand
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Dec 29, 2004 14:14 |  #5

Thanks Feenomenal, Pekka and Marie, I will work on those input you guys just gave me, its great to have a few fresh pairs of eye to look at things cause sometimes I suffer from being lock into the colour which I think it correct and not see the obvious. Cheers.

Warmest regards,
Ferdinand


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