Lerae - In Studio (2nd Session)

[4Bucks]

She's a striking model. Nice shots.

[roman_t]

Originally Posted by Ernst-Ulrich Schafer

Roman, Love that 2nd one and love that long neck of hers. I would have lower her chin just abit more, added more hair line and put the camera position higher. Your conversion is also just alittle to hot for me. Very nice portrait though and I would enjoy having her come to visit my studio.
Best to ya, Ernst

thank you very much, ernst! she'd love to but its so far away

Originally Posted by Tim Park

I think these are both nice, but #2 is definitely the winner!

appreciated, tim

Originally Posted by deeslk

Yep love the second photo...

thanks!

Originally Posted by ottonova

I think in #1 there is too much of her head cut off, particularly on the top and left side. #2 is better with the space right.
You could place the typography on #2 a little downwards, the type is now sticked to the bottom of the photograph.

thanks for comments! title position was just another version i played with

Originally Posted by Slicer

Whelp, I guess I'm a simple man =)...but I like them both. The focus seems to be on the eyes...and that's what my eyes are drawn to.......Nice work

glad you like them, slicer!

[roman_t]

Originally Posted by inthedeck

Roman, what I will say is that the 'emotion' captured in the two shots is one of a relaxed person. Not many models do I see, that are that way...so, nice accomplishment.

manish, interesting view! i invited her for nude shot but after our talk she changed her mind. i enjoy shooting headshots and we did it without mua and style artist.all i asked was letting me capture shoulders and neck naked.

Originally Posted by joeyserver

I like the 2nd one. Very classic portrait lighting. Wonderful capture.

very nice to hear from you!

Originally Posted by 4g63

2nd one looks better

i'd agree! thank you

Originally Posted by 4Bucks

She's a striking model. Nice shots.

i'll tell her that! thanks a lot!
thanks everyone,
sorry for late replies - got a cold lately nailed me down with high temp and cough
feel better now and your words helped for sure