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I love to get any feedback on this shot
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Post #1, Oct 04, 2011 11:56:10


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Great catch. I like the B&W but I wish this had a little more pop. Seems kinda flat to me.

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That is a really neat moment you've captured there. Wonder what the pup is daydreaming about? I experimented with some very minor edits (cropping [of the intruding foot and excess blurred area at bottom], contrast, selective sharpening/coloring, minor straightening) and it seemed to respond well. These edits could be refined to a much greater degree. This is a nice capture. Good eye.

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Post #3, Oct 04, 2011 15:06:40 as a reply to GorgeShooter's post 2 hours earlier.


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great composition

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Thanks for the kind comments

Post #5, Oct 05, 2011 19:37:25


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Wonderful catch - good eye. The image looks pretty good but I think a straight B&W would be even better.

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As Titus says, the eyes make this.

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Titus213 wrote in post #13212031external link
Wonderful catch - good eye. The image looks pretty good but I think a straight B&W would be even better.

Hi Titus , thank you for your kind comments
here it is B/W and another one from the same day, the thing i don't like about the second shot is their noses are out of focus, i guess i shouldve maybe had a bit more DOF

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Post #8, Oct 08, 2011 12:04:42


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That second one looks real good too. Nice work.

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It is an interesting shot, I would crop a little tighter so the lines of interest are in the upper third of the shot like this.

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I like the composition on the first image that was posted. Just the color seems like it could be slightly adjusted.

Post #11, Oct 08, 2011 18:59:14 as a reply to johndoorley's post 1 hour earlier.


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