Peeking under the door

foxhound · 4th of October 2011 (Tue)

I love to get any feedback on this shot
Cheers FH

GorgeShooter · 4th of October 2011 (Tue)

Great catch. I like the B&W but I wish this had a little more pop. Seems kinda flat to me.

ImageMogul · 4th of October 2011 (Tue)

That is a really neat moment you've captured there. Wonder what the pup is daydreaming about? I experimented with some very minor edits (cropping [of the intruding foot and excess blurred area at bottom], contrast, selective sharpening/coloring, minor straightening) and it seemed to respond well. These edits could be refined to a much greater degree. This is a nice capture. Good eye.

Regards,
Mark

actually · 5th of October 2011 (Wed)

great composition

foxhound · 5th of October 2011 (Wed)

Thanks for the kind comments

Titus213 · 6th of October 2011 (Thu)

Wonderful catch - good eye. The image looks pretty good but I think a straight B&W would be even better.

TheLaird · 6th of October 2011 (Thu)

As Titus says, the eyes make this.

foxhound · 8th of October 2011 (Sat)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Titus213

Wonderful catch - good eye. The image looks pretty good but I think a straight B&W would be even better.

Hi Titus , thank you for your kind comments
here it is B/W and another one from the same day, the thing i don't like about the second shot is their noses are out of focus, i guess i shouldve maybe had a bit more DOF

The second shot

Titus213 · 8th of October 2011 (Sat)

That second one looks real good too. Nice work.

johndoorley · 8th of October 2011 (Sat)

It is an interesting shot, I would crop a little tighter so the lines of interest are in the upper third of the shot like this.

Just my 2 cents worth.

Keep up the great work!

SimpleJack · 8th of October 2011 (Sat)

I like the composition on the first image that was posted. Just the color seems like it could be slightly adjusted.

4th of October 2011 (Tue)	#1
foxhound Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: London, Ontario , Canuckville Posts: 737 IMAGE EDITING OK	Peeking under the door I love to get any feedback on this shot Cheers FH IMG_8161 by foxhound51, on Flickr __________________ Canon 1D mk3 7D Gripped, 40D Gripped, XT Gripped, G10, 100-400L 70-200 2.8L 24-70L 50mm 1.8mk11 28-105 Canon 580 exII FLICKR

4th of October 2011 (Tue)	#2
GorgeShooter Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Oregon Posts: 1,413	Re: Peeking under the door Great catch. I like the B&W but I wish this had a little more pop. Seems kinda flat to me. __________________ 1DX \| 5D MkII (gripped) 16-35 f/2.8L \| 24-70 f/2.8L \| 24-105 f/4L IS \| 70-200 f/4L IS \| 100-400 f/4.5-5.6L IS \| 24 f/3.5L TS-E \| 45 f/2.8 TS-E \| 40 f/2.8 Pancake \| 15 f/2.8 Fisheye \| Tokina 100 f/2.8 Macro \| Canon 1.4x TC \| 580 EX II \| 430 EX II \| Manfrotto 055CXPRO4 \| Kirk BH-1 :: Smugmug :: \| :: Photography BLOG :: \| :: Workshops and Classes ::

4th of October 2011 (Tue)	#3
ImageMogul Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 583 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Peeking under the door That is a really neat moment you've captured there. Wonder what the pup is daydreaming about? I experimented with some very minor edits (cropping [of the intruding foot and excess blurred area at bottom], contrast, selective sharpening/coloring, minor straightening) and it seemed to respond well. These edits could be refined to a much greater degree. This is a nice capture. Good eye. Regards, Mark __________________ “Composition can’t be reduced to a set of rules ... Dissonance has its place in photography as well as music. If we confined ourselves to major and minor scales, the blues wouldn’t exist. Rules are tools, not laws.” ~ James Martin http://www.imagemogul.smugmug.com/ Last edited by ImageMogul : 4th of October 2011 (Tue) at 15:20.

5th of October 2011 (Wed)	#4
actually Member Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 37	Re: Peeking under the door great composition

5th of October 2011 (Wed)	#5
foxhound Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: London, Ontario , Canuckville Posts: 737 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Peeking under the door Thanks for the kind comments __________________ Canon 1D mk3 7D Gripped, 40D Gripped, XT Gripped, G10, 100-400L 70-200 2.8L 24-70L 50mm 1.8mk11 28-105 Canon 580 exII FLICKR

6th of October 2011 (Thu)	#6
Titus213 Cream of the Crop Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Camas, WA USA Posts: 18,709 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Peeking under the door Wonderful catch - good eye. The image looks pretty good but I think a straight B&W would be even better. __________________ Dave Perspiring photographer. Visit NorwoodPhotos.com

6th of October 2011 (Thu)	#7
TheLaird Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Inverness, Scotland Posts: 1,693 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Peeking under the door As Titus says, the eyes make this. __________________ Illegitimi non carborundum --- Now with 5dII --- Full gear listing ---

8th of October 2011 (Sat)	#9
Titus213 Cream of the Crop Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Camas, WA USA Posts: 18,709 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Peeking under the door That second one looks real good too. Nice work. __________________ Dave Perspiring photographer. Visit NorwoodPhotos.com

8th of October 2011 (Sat)	#11
SimpleJack Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Washington Posts: 837 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Peeking under the door I like the composition on the first image that was posted. Just the color seems like it could be slightly adjusted. __________________ Canon PowerShot S100

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