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my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
This is my first time to try this. Iwould like to know
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29th of November 2005 (Tue)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
some more
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29th of November 2005 (Tue)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
last set
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29th of November 2005 (Tue)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
First two look OK but could use some levels or curve adjustments as they are a bit dark. The next one is quite nice, good exposure, color, and I like the composition. I like the last one too but it's a bit dark for me.
Welcome to the forums...I'm sure you'll get more (and better) critiques from others. The question is does she like them? |
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30th of November 2005 (Wed)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
interesting composites
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30th of November 2005 (Wed)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
On the last picture you have a composite including a picture of the second to last shot. I think the color looks 100% better in the composite image and would like to see the larger original....
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30th of November 2005 (Wed)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
here is the full color original you asked for.
and thanks for your help. |
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30th of November 2005 (Wed)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
Looks good. I really like the full color version of the last pic. I think after some curve adjustments the darker ones would be fine.
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30th of November 2005 (Wed)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
I like the idea of the one on the tracks... but might have done it the other way. Let her be walking into the color (bright and colorful future ahead of her.)
Just a thought. |
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1st of December 2005 (Thu)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
very nice... i had realized it was faded from b/w to color.... but imho the color is much nicer. would have been better if it was taken without the distracting machinery though. and possibly with the rest of her legs. in any event very good images.
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1st of December 2005 (Thu)
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Re: my 1st try at sr. pics/ c and c
Nice work
Now do you do this for money or is this a one time thing for a friend? I would say to take a flash and or a reflector on your next shoot. I like the composite photos you've done nice work
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