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Nov 05, 2012 10:16 |  #1

One from a shoot I did at the weekend.

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Nov 05, 2012 10:51 |  #2

I like it, but I think she kind of looks like a floating face and hands because her entire body and most of her hair blends in a bit too much with the background. I think it would greatly improve the shot if either she was wearing gray or the background was gray - just getting some more tones in there would define her and not let her slip into the backdrop, though you could still keep it dark if that was your intention.




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Nov 05, 2012 19:39 |  #3

I actually like what was done here, and I can see the original intent, which was to emphasize the model's face. Lighting seems very nice, and not overblown either.


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Nov 06, 2012 09:26 |  #4

That's a book cover shot. I like it.

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Nov 06, 2012 10:11 |  #5

Thanks for the comments chaps.


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