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Before and After - The Weekly Editing Challenge

 
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Jul 05, 2015 20:46 |  #1

Before and After - The Weekly Editing Challenge
...now compiled into a single, easy to locate thread, that can be added to your subscribe/follow list!

Rules are simple:

  • Download the image file from the current week

  • Contestants will have 7 days to edit the image and post their edited version to the thread (1 entry per week)

  • The owner of the original image will choose a winner

  • The winner will copy & paste this post and include a new downloadable image link

    The new image must be unedited / SOOC (straight our of camera), full-resolution, and in a RAW format, ie. CR2, DNG, TIF, etc
    (Dropbox works well for uploading and linking these large files)



The purpose of this game is to be creative and learn new editing techniques. You must give some insight into exactly how you went about editing the image. For example, increased shadows sliders, reduced highlights, local sharpening, white balance adjustment, specific filters used, tone curve adjustments, etc. Comments and/or questions regarding the edits are encouraged.

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Jul 05, 2015 20:46 |  #2

Winners List:

Member Names - Dates

Cacawcacaw - 7/13/15


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Jul 05, 2015 20:54 |  #3

Entries must be submitted by midnight of 7/12/15.


Here is the link to the full size image up for editing:
https://www.dropbox.co​m ...20-%20Mannetti21.dng?dl=0 (external link)


And here is the JPEG preview for reference:

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Jul 06, 2015 00:18 |  #4

Converted by RawTherapee using L*a*b* Noise Reduction {Luminance 60}, Tone Mapping {.25,1.13,5.36,9}, Highlight Compression {500}

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Jul 06, 2015 02:43 |  #5

OK, I'll play.

First I played with the crop. My initial inclination was to try and make this a photo of the balloon but the scene really didn't allow that. I still managed a decent result but then I decided to include more of the festival instead of eliminating it. Here's the first version.

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Compositionally, still not an ideal photo but this isn't an artsy type of shot anyway.

In Lr I adjusted white balance off the white tent canopy the boosted the exposure 2/3 a stop and pushed the shadows +39 and the whites +65. The bright sky on the top right was screaming for attention; cropping got rid of some of it and I used Lr to pull the highlights -100 and added some curves and adjustment brushes in layers to tone it down. I probably could have spent more time evening it out but I got it to where I was reasonably satisfied. Then I went to work on the balloon, adding a couple of adjustment brushes to brighten it up and make it glow. Finally I bumped the sharpening to 41 with a mask of 84 to minimize noise increase, and luminance increased noise reduction to 26 to get most of the noise out of the sky.

Moving on to Ps I duplicated the background layer then used a high-pass filter, adjusting it to just catch the texture of the grass. Then I blended the new layer at 93% and masked out the sky and edges of trees and the balloon to reduce noise and haloing. This caused the noise in the trees to go way up but that looked better than the softness that was there originally. While I was in Ps I picked up the trash on the ground.

My last step was going into Perfect Effects 8 and adding a slight amount of "glow" to the overall image and then back into Lr to bring up the shadows just a touch more.

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I just wish I could see what the people in the photo are looking at.

[P.S., I generally like the automatic retrieval of EXIF info, except in cases like this.]

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Jul 06, 2015 14:31 |  #6

Here's my attempt.

IMAGE: https://c4.staticflickr.com/4/3832/19459051836_643e050b0f_c.jpg

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Jul 06, 2015 18:09 |  #7

The light in the background made this look like it was supposed to be an evening shot, so I added an evening sky. I just got done reading a bunch of stuff about blending layers, so I spent a long time goofing around with multiple layers, masking and trying different things. Here's what I've been reading today. (external link)

My advanced Photoshop skills are moving along more quickly than my basic Photoshop skills, so I still do a bunch of knuckleheaded things, light flattening the layers so I can go back into Camera Raw where I'm more comfortable with the adjustments. (Like making the light pole vertical.)

If anyone is interested (and I would love any kind of criticism you'd be willing to throw at me), I'll include a link to the .psd file (external link) (before the layers were flattened). I still have a lot to learn about doing non-destructive adjustments to individual layers, and how to mask and sharpen more efficiently.

The guy with the skateboard and the family in the lower right caught my eye, so I cropped mostly around them, which seemed to put the balloon in a pretty good place. Then, to increase the feeling of dusk, I illuminated the balloon a bit, with a shadow on the upper right, and added some lens flare to the pole light.

Thanks - that was a perfect image to experiment with!

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Jul 07, 2015 01:44 |  #8

Here is my attempt. Not sure how to share Lighroom settings. Seemed like a mellow evening scene, so tried to add some warmth. Resized to 5mb to fit POTN's size requirements. Pls critique and comment, I'm quite poor at post.

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Jul 09, 2015 03:08 |  #9

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Jul 09, 2015 06:40 as a reply to NigelD's post |  #10

How did you edit the shot, it looks nice.




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Jul 09, 2015 07:49 |  #11

Here is my go at this image. Cheers!

IMAGE: http://lasavio.com/images/potn/balloon_final.jpg

Basic process:

• Started off in Lightroom
o Adjust color temp and tint
o Exposure +1.55
o Highlights all the way down
o Whites – 90
o Blacks +48
• Imported into Photoshop
o Curves adjustment
o Contrast
o Mask balloon and ropes then invert selection to add Gaussian blur to all but balloon
o Lower saturation on all but balloon
• Back into Lightroom
o Lots of local adjustment brushes to tweak contrast, exposure and clarity and saturation in various areas of the image

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Jul 09, 2015 08:37 |  #12

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Temp: 7,800
Highlights: -100
Shadows: +100
Whites: -8
Blacks: -20
Clarity: +29
Vibrance: +22

Tone Curve: Medium Contrast
Sharpening: 50
NR Luminance: 25

I also did a graduated filter with a slight orange hue, reducing exposure -1.15

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Jul 09, 2015 10:30 as a reply to Benitoite's post |  #13

Thanks Benitoite,
I made a letterbox crop and cloned out the family in the bottom. Then cloned in some sky to replace the blown out bit. Then used LAB colour boost backed off to 50% and then some dodge and burn to introduce more light into the interesting bits - peoples' faces and the balloon etc. Then put into luminosity mode and smart sharpened.


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Jul 10, 2015 11:20 |  #14

Here is my attempt.....

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Jul 10, 2015 13:57 |  #15

Same settings as before but a look at the basket.

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