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Jul 28, 2017 17:55 |  #1

Please compare and share your thoughts on these :] I have to choose one of them.

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Jul 28, 2017 18:39 |  #2

#2 for me.


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Jul 28, 2017 18:39 |  #3

I'm a sucker for a smile; but I like #2 best. Is there some movement on her right arm by the elbow?


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Jul 28, 2017 19:03 |  #4

I prefer number 1. I like all that geometry that is going on with the ventilation hood, its shadow, the cupboard to her right, it's own shadow, the deep shadow block RHS, and the various other hard straight lines that are in the image




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Jul 28, 2017 19:54 |  #5

If they're for the subject/client, which does she prefer?


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Jul 29, 2017 02:54 |  #6

Not a client. It's just a "one BW portrait at you location" projecty thingy I do.


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Jul 29, 2017 05:44 as a reply to olafs osh's post |  #7

No 1 for me, it seems a bit more relaxed and natural. I find the cup in No 2 a bit intrusive.




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Jul 29, 2017 07:07 |  #8

I kind of like picture 2 but Ramon has a point about the cup. It just seems so big.


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Jul 29, 2017 08:08 |  #9

Her expression interests me more in no. 2. The mug doesn't distract me, because it provides context.


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Jul 30, 2017 18:53 |  #10

The one sitting on the counter. The expression seems more natural and at ease.


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Jul 31, 2017 02:36 |  #11

joedlh wrote in post #18414936 (external link)
The one sitting on the counter. The expression seems more natural and at ease.

Ramon-uk wrote in post #18413916 (external link)
No 1 for me, it seems a bit more relaxed and natural. I find the cup in No 2 a bit intrusive.

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Aug 01, 2017 21:58 |  #12

Second has better posture.
The head is pushed forward very harshly in #1, and looks like a hunchback.


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Aug 01, 2017 22:06 |  #13

#2

....just something about that smile


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Aug 03, 2017 10:27 |  #14

I like them both but they both could be cropped on the right side, too much dead space there. Also second one, shadows could be opened up. Looks a little dark.




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Aug 14, 2017 08:41 |  #15

#2 for me


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