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Oct 22, 2017 23:20 |  #16

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To the lesser-trained eye, and probably the general public, this photograph is fantastic as it is now.

My first impression was that if I don't scrutinize and just look to enjoy, it looks good.


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Oct 22, 2017 23:23 as a reply to mdvaden's post |  #17

Thank you. I'm very open for thoughts on how to improve though...


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Oct 23, 2017 17:39 |  #18

Kristine2514 wrote in post #18478751 (external link)
Thank you. I'm very open for thoughts on how to improve though...

If I look for a moment, the eyes seems slightly too bright in the iris. There's a fold of material at the bottom that could be worth removing. something to the right of the hair looks unusual where it meets the background. I'd try to see if the lower lip could be touched up where pink lip gloss wore off (or whatever).

If the ratio is 2 x 3, maybe try to crop a bit off the bottom similar to 11 x 14


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Oct 23, 2017 18:24 as a reply to mdvaden's post |  #19

Thanks for your comments. I think when you are new to photoshop, one thing you tend to go overboard on is making the eyes too bright, color too intense and what have you. That is one big thing I've been mindful lately on pulling back on


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Oct 23, 2017 18:33 |  #20

What's with her mouth? Either there's not enough lipstick or not enough lip..........


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Oct 23, 2017 18:36 |  #21

Hmmm ... this image is getting very seriously over-thought. Take another picture and post it for us now please. This one is all done to pieces.


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Oct 23, 2017 18:44 as a reply to photosbytw's post |  #22

Not enough lip...


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Oct 23, 2017 18:45 as a reply to DaviSto's post |  #23

Lol ok I will...


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Nov 07, 2017 10:55 |  #24

Fine and natural expression on face. Pose of your model add a lot to this composition I like this pose and theme (motive) with her right hand. Good use of light and lighting. Maybe only one little thing, I would prefer to try with remove this little white dot, point which is situated in up part of background near right up corner. Generally color of background works well here.


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Nov 07, 2017 11:00 as a reply to Mkl's post |  #25

Thank you for your nice comments. I noticed that annoying little dot and clone stamped it before I printed the photo and gave it to her.


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