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Nov 13, 2017 21:30 |  #1

I haven't played around with it too much, but I like the snap that it gives to an otherwise boring photo.
This image was taken the other day at Paiute GC here in Vegas, it needed a sky, it REALLY needed a sky lol.

I've never done a 15+ layered image before, probably "over" done lol ... My first critique .. go for it! :oops:

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Nov 13, 2017 21:34 |  #2

Tomi Hawk wrote in post #18495848 (external link)
I haven't played around with it too much, but I like the snap that it gives to an otherwise boring photo.
This image was taken the other day at Paiute GC here in Vegas, it needed a sky, it REALLY needed a sky lol.

I've never done a 15+ layered image before, probably "over"done lol ... My first critique .. go for it! :oops:


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The sky replacement looks good to me!


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Nov 13, 2017 21:38 |  #3

PhotosGuy wrote in post #18495852 (external link)
The sky replacement looks good to me!

Thanks PG! That's awesome comin from you! :-D


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Nov 13, 2017 21:41 |  #4

Tomi Hawk wrote in post #18495854 (external link)
Thanks PG! That's awesome comin from you! :-D

I've done a lot worse! ; D


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Nov 14, 2017 01:05 |  #5

One more ... time consuming lol.

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Nov 14, 2017 05:20 |  #6

I think the second attempt is much better. I'm not sure what has happened to the tree at the left side of the first one but it doesn't look quite right.

I think both of them are slightly oversaturated making the greens look a bit too harsh.




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Nov 14, 2017 13:39 |  #7

The first attempt doesn't work for me due to the bright yellow (warm) on the putting green and other grounds. It needs balanced w/ the sky IMO.
The second is much better.


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Nov 14, 2017 23:35 |  #8

Ramon-uk wrote in post #18496013 (external link)
I think the second attempt is much better. I'm not sure what has happened to the tree at the left side of the first one but it doesn't look quite right.

I think both of them are slightly oversaturated making the greens look a bit too harsh.

Thanks, yeah, I guess I didn't get all that tree with the eraser .. ug! :oops:
I could crop it lol .. :cry:

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Nov 14, 2017 23:36 |  #9

DagoImaging wrote in post #18496363 (external link)
The first attempt doesn't work for me due to the bright yellow (warm) on the putting green and other grounds. It needs balanced w/ the sky IMO.
The second is much better.

Thanks, that second one is getting great reviews else where also! :-D


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Nov 16, 2017 17:05 |  #10

The light on the ground in your first shot doesn't match up with the sky. It's easy to spot if you know what to look for. Probably would fool some though. The replacement itself looks good. It's hard to match up a sky from a completely different shot.


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Nov 16, 2017 17:20 |  #11

The second looks nice.
The first one looks like there are 2 suns at opposite ends of the sky. The reds suggest a sun in that direction while there looks like a sun lighting from the left as well. But it looks pretty otherwise.




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Nov 16, 2017 22:40 |  #12

I liked the first one because it looked to me like it was supposed to look like a mosaic. Given that, I thought it was well done and quite interesting actually.

Yea, I like it - and I don't like overdone/unrealistic images in general.

To me #2 doesn't look realistic enough, but also not unrealistic enough to be interesting. (the clouds are very contrasty, and no cloud shadows for that sky).


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Nov 17, 2017 10:38 |  #13

Yeah #2 the clouds show the sun looks to be coming from the right side of the frame but the shadows on the ground are opposite.


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Nov 17, 2017 11:01 |  #14

Numenorean wrote in post #18498511 (external link)
Yeah #2 the clouds show the sun looks to be coming from the right side of the frame but the shadows on the ground are opposite.

Speaking of clouds............woul​dn't there be shadows from the clouds?...............​There's a lot of clouds...............


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Nov 17, 2017 14:41 |  #15

Look good to me. Keep it up!




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