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Dec 15, 2017 02:11 |  #1

I would appreciate your thoughts on this image of Claire.

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Dec 15, 2017 06:02 |  #2

A little hot for my taste. Otherwise, good.


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Dec 15, 2017 08:25 |  #3

saea501 wrote in post #18518347 (external link)
A little hot for my taste. Otherwise, good.

Thank you for the critique, but sorry, hot in which sense? over-saturated?


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Dec 15, 2017 09:44 as a reply to BasAndrews's post |  #4

Sorry, Bas......I meant over exposed....too bright.


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Dec 15, 2017 10:00 |  #5

the hot spots on the skin are an issue for me, would like better smoothness on her skin to even out the tones.

A little Freq Separation and adjustment in exp, highlights and shadows.
If you mind let me know and I'll remove it.


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Dec 15, 2017 10:53 |  #6

DagoImaging wrote in post #18518472 (external link)
the hot spots on the skin are an issue for me, would like better smoothness on her skin to even out the tones.

A little Freq Separation and adjustment in exp, highlights and shadows.
If you mind let me know and I'll remove it.


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Many thanks. Feel free to edit. I have already done some FS on the image, but I would appreciate anything you can do to improve my technique.

I can provide the raw file if you wanted to use that?


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Dec 15, 2017 10:55 |  #7

saea501 wrote in post #18518457 (external link)
Sorry, Bas......I meant over exposed....too bright.

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Dec 15, 2017 12:23 |  #8

the jpg I posted is my edit but I'd take the RAW if you want to share it.


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Dec 15, 2017 12:32 |  #9

DagoImaging wrote in post #18518628 (external link)
the jpg I posted is my edit but I'd take the RAW if you want to share it.


DOH!, that what I get for browsing while working :D

I like the edit, thank you. I will PM a link to the raw file.

Thank you again.

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Dec 15, 2017 13:56 |  #10

Just sent you a link to a shared folder w/ a PSD, actions and a video of what I did.


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Dec 15, 2017 14:25 |  #11

First a public thank you. That was excellent, and very kind of you.

I use the same method for FS, but I paid way less attention to where I blurred the LF layer :oops:

The eye work is great, I tend to only use a little sharpening to make them pop. In this case I think I hadn't touched them.

I will look at trying this again, but for now many thanks, it really is appreciated.

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Dec 16, 2017 08:42 |  #12

@BasAndrews i really like your work, i enjoy everyone of them and on this
occasion saea501 is right (overexposed), i did some FS, Doge and Burning
using curves, i hope you don't mind, but if you wnat i can remove it.

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wamvar wrote in post #18519136 (external link)
@BasAndrews i really like your work, i enjoy everyone of them and on this
occasion saea501 is right (overexposed), i did some FS, Doge and Burning
using curves, i hope you don't mind, but if you wnat i can remove it.
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No problem with you editing. I like the edit, although at first glance it looked a little too smooth. Again I can provide the RAW file if you enjoy editing and want to have that to give you more control.


Thank you for the kind comment on my work, I have a long way to go to get to average, but I am enjoying learning :)

Looking at the histogram for the Raw file it is not actually blown, (I tend to think of blown as over-exposed), but it there is something not quite right with it. Other shots from the same section of the shoot look better, exposure wise.

Thank you again.


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Dec 17, 2017 15:00 |  #14

Weird framing.


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