Joined Mar 2018
"Looks rough and well used"
Gallery: 1085 photos
Best ofs: 2
Joined Feb 2013
I play with fire, run with scissors and skate on thin ice all at once!
Gallery: 97 photos
Joined Jul 2009
Location: Chicago & Terminal 1, 3 or 5 with Samsonite & Pelican
Focus and proper exposure would help. The top one, in particular, seems underexposed, hence a lack of contrast. Compositionally, I'd move your girl to a side (in both), create some leading lines and interest using her body angles.
multidisciplinary visual guy | traveler on the 8-fold path | seeker of the spark | walker of the dog
1. Distracting background elements (tree, white post). Agree with MV about having the background a little darker to make your subject stand out more. Three toes sticking out is bit weird to me.