Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies. Read More.
OK
Index  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear  •   • Reviews
Guest
New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear  •   • Reviews
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photography Talk by Genre Critique Corner 
Thread started 14 May 2018 (Monday) 10:20
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)

Feedback makes us better

 
Shaun ­ Liddy
Member
162 posts
Gallery: 12 photos
Likes: 137
Joined Feb 2016
Post edited 7 days ago by Shaun Liddy.
     
May 14, 2018 10:20 |  #1

Looking for feedback. These are my girls taken yesterday. I find it a bit challenging keeping Yvonne's hair from being blown out do to how blonde it is. I often try to under expose a bit then raise shadows, lower highlights.

First one taken a couple hours before sunset, in the shade and with flash at 1/4 power with a small soft box on the flash..

Second one they are facing South about 3hrs before sunset, no flash. Probably could have benefited using a flash.


HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.


HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
rrblint
Listen! .... do you smell something?
Avatar
20,596 posts
Gallery: 38 photos
Best ofs: 2
Likes: 1434
Joined May 2012
Location: U.S.A.
     
May 16, 2018 13:32 |  #2

Love the first one. Two happy-go-lucky young girls in a beautiful floral setting, what could be nicer?

The second one could have used that flash. Love the stepping on toes theme, it would have been nice if the older girl had a loving but "ouch" look on her face.


Mark

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
PhotosGuy
Moderator
Avatar
75,241 posts
Gallery: 8 photos
Likes: 2091
Joined Feb 2004
Location: Middle of Michigan
     
May 16, 2018 22:16 |  #3

Shaun Liddy wrote in post #18625510 (external link)
thumbnail
Hosted photo: posted by Shaun Liddy in
./showthread.php?p=186​25510&i=i39742284
forum: Critique Corner

That's very nice & natural looking. I would put it on my wall.


FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
Classic Carz, Racing, Air Show, Flowers.
Find the light... A few Car Lighting Tips, and MOVE YOUR FEET!
Have you thought about making your own book? // Need an exposure crutch?
New Image Size Limits: Image must not exceed 1600 pixels on any side.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Shaun ­ Liddy
THREAD ­ STARTER
Member
162 posts
Gallery: 12 photos
Likes: 137
Joined Feb 2016
     
May 16, 2018 22:29 |  #4

Thanks for the feedback.

I agree the second shot would have been much better with flash.


Anything else I could have done differently on either shot? Both while shooting or processing?




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
photosbytw
Goldmember
Avatar
1,246 posts
Gallery: 47 photos
Likes: 886
Joined Jan 2015
Location: Blue Ridge Mountains
     
May 18, 2018 14:01 |  #5

Shaun Liddy wrote in post #18627017 (external link)
Thanks for the feedback.

I agree the second shot would have been much better with flash.


Anything else I could have done differently on either shot? Both while shooting or processing?

On your first image a step or two to your right...............th​e sign, the sign...............it adds nothing......unless of course there was a bigger distraction to the left. Getting a shot from a low angle...............go​od thinking

Respectfully


Don't even begin to think I'm criticizing your images.
Just a natural curiosity.
tw
www.photosbytw.net

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)

221 views & 1 like for this thread
Feedback makes us better
FORUMS Photography Talk by Genre Critique Corner 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Index   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset

Not a member yet?
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.1forum software
version 2.1 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member is ChrisS76a
848 guests, 418 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 6430, that happened on Dec 03, 2017

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.