Project film noir

Citizen_Insane · 19th of January 2007 (Fri)

Cool photos. I'd like to see the subject lit a little better to pull him away from the background a bit. I would try to shorten up the DOF a bit by opening up the aperture and moving the subject farther from the wall.

rasmusx · 20th of January 2007 (Sat)

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Originally Posted by Citizen_Insane

Cool photos. I'd like to see the subject lit a little better to pull him away from the background a bit. I would try to shorten up the DOF a bit by opening up the aperture and moving the subject farther from the wall.

The room was quite small, so I couldn't move him farther away.

More comments please!

Zilly · 27th of February 2007 (Tue)

not very film noir but i like it for me its more teenage urban decay think the smoking implement (forgotten the proper name) could of been highlighted a bit more show that they are a step further down the line from just smoking

just my 2 cents

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Citizen_Insane Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Ames, IA Posts: 453 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Project film noir Cool photos. I'd like to see the subject lit a little better to pull him away from the background a bit. I would try to shorten up the DOF a bit by opening up the aperture and moving the subject farther from the wall. __________________ Gear Flickr

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Zilly Cream of the Crop Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: uk Posts: 5,084	Re: Project film noir not very film noir but i like it for me its more teenage urban decay think the smoking implement (forgotten the proper name) could of been highlighted a bit more show that they are a step further down the line from just smoking just my 2 cents __________________ Dom Automotive Photographer

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