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Old 10th of June 2007 (Sun)   #1
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Default taken this morning

This shot was taken about two hours ago. I was hoping to get better sunlight, but the skies were not cooperating with me.
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3:20pm. Posted a reply below and after looking at the original posted with some sleep...what was I thinking. See the new ones below. Thanks again.

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Old 10th of June 2007 (Sun)   #2
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Default Re: taken this morning

white balance is off.
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what concerns me is it looks like the photo isn't in register. Look at the power meter on the wall. I looks like the cyan level is just below and to the left of the other layers. What did you shoot this with
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Default Re: taken this morning

the sharpening is too strong, you need to defringe those colors on the corners, there is something odd with the white balance and I think you need to work little bit more on the composition.

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Old 10th of June 2007 (Sun)   #5
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is it just me or does that church seem to lean to the right?

and yeah, the color registration is off.
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Old 10th of June 2007 (Sun)   #6
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Default Re: taken this morning

Wow, thanks for the feedback. It's amazing what it looked like with no sleep for almost two days. Looking back, it is not really that impressive. I took the original and did some work now that I had some sleep. Any more feedback on these are appreciated.
Howitzboy: Yeah, the church is a little crooked. This church is actually crooked as you pointed out. There was some settling shortly after it was built and from the angle that we are looking at it, it leans slightly. Almost like the leaning tower of piza but not that intense.
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