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first two are too dark, and lack composition. the flower shot is soft and not very interesting. the city shot (phily?) is also a snap shot, and again lacks interest.
However, I really like your last shot. b/c of close crop, and sense of motion. |
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I agree with the darkness, I am just now learning how to lighten up the shadows and get rid of that, I need to try that on those. My main problem with my pictures is they are soft, I need to drop the coin and get a sharper lens, for sure. City shop is NYC, World Trade Center site, just thought it was interesting.
Thanks for the constructive criticism, I appreciate it! |
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Love the last one!
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You know its crazy you said that, seriously, but I am glad you did, b/c I just ordered the 50 1.8 from Dell. I was looking through the lens polls for a inexspensive, sharper lens and read some greats things about it, so ordered it.
Thanks once again for the input. |
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