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3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
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Re: 3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
The third one looks very good to me, but the first 2 could use a little front lighting for my taste
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Re: 3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
I agree the first two are in desperate need of fill flash.
The third one is cute but needs to be brightened up a bit, try levels and contrast and I'd dodge the eyes just a little too. Just my 2 cents.
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Re: 3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
Agreed with the above two comments. Third shot is good, but some PP could be utilised. The first two are just a little too dark for me. There is more detail in the window than the actual subject's face. It should be the other way around, or at least even detail.
Keep takin em... 
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Re: 3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
i was goin for a silhouette look with the first too.I like them a lot.
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Re: 3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
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27th of June 2007 (Wed)
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Re: 3 Black and Whites. C&C Please.
If you were going for a sillouette I would put him in the middle of the window next time....so the light surrounds him, so his whole body is darkened... maybe even with him looking out of it with his hands on the window as well...
Peace. Eric
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