another Lurker comming out

[caymiss]

Hello all,

I am yet another lurker seeking to learn and improve my skills. I feel I have learned so much in the past months here and see that one of the best learning tools is to just put yourself out there and ask for critique and guidance.

Here I go!!

Attached are a couple of images from a 1st Anniversary shoot I did for a local photographer. I am allowed to process and use these photos for my own portfolio under my contract with him. He will be meeting with me for a critique session soon, but I would really value additional commentary and suggestions about how I could improve.

I am not fishing for compliments, but would like reinforcement for what I did "right" and guidance for improvements I can strive for. Cropping suggestions are also welcome.

This Park is popular for Engagement and Anniversary sessions, so I expect to go there again in the future.

These photos were done as follows:
1. shot in RAW
2. imported into Lightroom
3. minor white balance adjustments
4. no cropping or other post processing at his point

Thank you,
Becky


There are also additional pics at -
http://home.cfl.rr.com/rhowie/
that have been cropped and downsized for the web.