My oldest daughter

catsintrbleagn · 11th of August 2007 (Sat)

My mom had just done her hair so I did a quickie shoot with her.
C&C welcome!

kja · 11th of August 2007 (Sat)

#3 stands out as my favourite - it's got great impact for me.

suecassidy · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

#3 is the one I like the best as well. I don't' know your daughter, but that seems to be a real personality shot. Sweetness and defiance all rolled together. She has a great look. Good shots.

Savannah79 · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

#3 is FANTASTIC!

henleg · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

I like the series a lot, but I'm not sure the softening works with her hair in the first shot. I think with bold colours like that, the hair needs to be sharp and crisp, as I would imagine it's a part of her personality.

Two things I would do is a bit of PP to bring out her eyes (she has nice eyes and could be shown off). I would also like to see some shots of her smiling, as I would bet she has a nice smile, too.

Overall, a very nice job indeed.

Henny.

Riverlander · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

101 people looked -- 3 left comments. I hesitated a long time and then decided not to make any other comment.

twisted pixels · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

I think number 3 is a good photo and and I kinda like number 1 also.
Maybe I am missing something here but I think all photos are worthy of comments, as comments are a form of help and instruction for the advancement of skills.OH and also incentive for a photographer to better ones self.

AutoXer · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

#1 all the way.

catsintrbleagn · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

Thank you for the feedback!
I'm a little confused about Riverlander not commenting...I would like any suggestion/opinion good or bad.

Savannah79 · 12th of August 2007 (Sun)

I agree with the comment about the softening of the hair in the first pic- i like the background in it, though- but maybe pose her a little closer to the guitar? Arm seems a little stretched (IMHO)...

Twitch1977 · 13th of August 2007 (Mon)

I like the first three, the tone of the first and third one are cool. The second one might be my favorite but it needs some processing, there isn't much contrast and the colors aren't popping nearly enough imo.

Kurt

Ryan W · 13th of August 2007 (Mon)

Hey, great images. Especially love the first

Could you share the PP on the 1st and third by any chance

11th of August 2007 (Sat)	#2
kja Cream of the Crop Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: 40th floor ledge but enjoying the view Posts: 5,903 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter #3 stands out as my favourite - it's got great impact for me.

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#4
Savannah79 Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Kansas Posts: 73	Re: My oldest daughter #3 is FANTASTIC! __________________ Canon XTi, Canon 70-300mm IS USM f/4.0-5.6. Learning, and have a long way to go. CC welcome! http://www.flickr.com/photos/savannah79/

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#5
henleg Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 373 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter I like the series a lot, but I'm not sure the softening works with her hair in the first shot. I think with bold colours like that, the hair needs to be sharp and crisp, as I would imagine it's a part of her personality. Two things I would do is a bit of PP to bring out her eyes (she has nice eyes and could be shown off). I would also like to see some shots of her smiling, as I would bet she has a nice smile, too. Overall, a very nice job indeed. Henny. __________________ You can't destroy the world! That's where I keep all my stuff!!!

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#6
Riverlander Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Riverland, South Australia Posts: 686 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter 101 people looked -- 3 left comments. I hesitated a long time and then decided not to make any other comment. __________________ Canon; 7D with grip, EF-S 10-22, EF 24-105L, 580EX II flash, 550EX flash, 430EX flash, Sigma; 18-50 f/2.8, 50-150 f/2.8, 120-300 f/2.8, 50-500 f/4.5-6.3 OS, 30 f/1.4, 150 Macro; Sigma APO 1.4x and 2x converters, Benro M-257 tripod & B-1 ballhead. Wimberley Sidekick. Lots of other stuff.

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#7
twisted pixels Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: East Coast Australia Posts: 457 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter I think number 3 is a good photo and and I kinda like number 1 also. Maybe I am missing something here but I think all photos are worthy of comments, as comments are a form of help and instruction for the advancement of skills.OH and also incentive for a photographer to better ones self. __________________ 20D,400D, A2, G7, Powershot A40, 550EX Flash, 70-200 2.8L, 28-105 USM, 28-135 IS USM, 50mm 1.4 USM, 18-55(kit) BGE2, Expodisc, Manfrotto 141RC tripod, Manfrotto 679B monopod, A stack of Sandisk CF cards, many Lowepro bags and an Extremely limited knowledge of taking good photographs.

11th of August 2007 (Sat)	#1
catsintrbleagn Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Bothell, Washington Posts: 86 IMAGE EDITING OK	My oldest daughter My mom had just done her hair so I did a quickie shoot with her. C&C welcome!

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#3
suecassidy Goldmember Join Date: May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California Posts: 3,913 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter #3 is the one I like the best as well. I don't' know your daughter, but that seems to be a real personality shot. Sweetness and defiance all rolled together. She has a great look. Good shots. __________________ Sue Cassidy GEAR: Canon 1ds, Canon 1d Mark iii, Sony RX 100, Canon 50mmL 1.2, Canon 70-200L 2.8 IS, Canon 100-400L IS, Canon 14mm L, 2.8, . Lighting: Elinchrom Rangers, D-lite 400s, Canon 580/550 flashes. 74 ' Octabank, 27' Rotalux. Editing: Aperture 3

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#8
AutoXer Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Maryland Posts: 164	Re: My oldest daughter #1 all the way.

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#9
catsintrbleagn Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Bothell, Washington Posts: 86 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter Thank you for the feedback! I'm a little confused about Riverlander not commenting...I would like any suggestion/opinion good or bad.

12th of August 2007 (Sun)	#10
Savannah79 Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Kansas Posts: 73	Re: My oldest daughter I agree with the comment about the softening of the hair in the first pic- i like the background in it, though- but maybe pose her a little closer to the guitar? Arm seems a little stretched (IMHO)... __________________ Canon XTi, Canon 70-300mm IS USM f/4.0-5.6. Learning, and have a long way to go. CC welcome! http://www.flickr.com/photos/savannah79/

13th of August 2007 (Mon)	#11
Twitch1977 Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Saskatchewan, Canada Posts: 619 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter I like the first three, the tone of the first and third one are cool. The second one might be my favorite but it needs some processing, there isn't much contrast and the colors aren't popping nearly enough imo. Kurt __________________ http://www.flickr.com/photos/twitch1977/ Advice is a noun, advise is a verb.

13th of August 2007 (Mon)	#12
Ryan W Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Newport South Wales Posts: 287 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My oldest daughter Hey, great images. Especially love the first Could you share the PP on the 1st and third by any chance

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